Open Poetry #28 |
Pay No Attention |
SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
Please don’t notice the marks on my wrist Ignore them ok? They are no risk I have had some times Where I have had to resort to such things But never again Will it happen I swear Don’t you worry Ill be safe Just because the scars are still there Doesn’t mean that Im still there Im not like that anymore Ive past that state Im getting through Theres nothing for you to be going through Don’t try and pry I can take care of myself My life is my own And if I take it away It was my life And it would be my problem So I ask you again Pay no attention to the marks on my wrist Im beyond that I swear So leave me be Life is to precious to take away from yourself, but what if it's one of those presents that you want put back on the shelf in exchange for something e |
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idonthaveaname Junior Member
since 2003-08-19
Posts 15 |
I enjoyed your poem, but it came at a bad time (read the one i just posted). I am glad you have overcome your problems, it takes strength, courage, and will power. I have a few comments, please do not take offense. "My life is my own And if I take it away It was my life And it would be my problem" Unfortunately, i just lost a friend yesterday. And I will tell you, it is much my problem now. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Just so you know and don't waste effort and time... you are not allowed to post more than three poems per day here...out of respect for others. Any beyond three may be removed or locked by a moderator... |
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