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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Laying flat centred upon these sheets I am whole still Shark bite you filled my sea with blue The last thing I need is another you Drug fuelled passion fake ignition soul food malnutrition of heart What happened to awake against your ethics? to truly feel Nature tells me I have survived playing second fiddle to destroying addiction I wanted to save you. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop But does he want to be saved? LOL Good write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Shark bite you filled my sea with blue" ---How on earth do you come up with lines like these? They are absolutely brill!  Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - I believe one has to want to be saved first before they will accept any help. Good write... BC |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Sey, thanks for reading. No, he does not. And i wish that made it hurt less, but it really doesn't.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...you continue to dig deeper and deeper and your words grow in propprtion to this depth. Eric |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Shark bite you filled my sea with blue" Echoing what was stated before ... such amazing lines you pen ... WOW. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
absolutely fantastick... (I took a one day break, and didn't realize that we got a new forum  )nice to read Gem insanity is not a crime |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
gemjop, this is startling in colour and depth. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Drug fuelled passion fake ignition soul food malnutrition of heart What happened to awake against your ethics?" You caught the real in this one gem. I remember asking someone once, "Don't you ever just wanna be straight for a few hours?" |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very cool and insightful write. Jason |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
'Never let anyone into your life that has more problems than you' -- me another gem |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nature tells me I have survived playing second fiddle to destroying addiction I wanted to save you. Yes, my little friend, Gemma..... you have survived him....and I am so thankful for that. Here's a great big bunch of hugs and love, Little One....   Love ya, Gemmagirl Ethel Mae |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
damn If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
quote: amazing...i loved this....especially those last two lines! riley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hi, my name is Sue and I am co-dependant . . . Yes, me too Gem - me too . . . tinkering in my head tonight xxoo |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is just such wonderful writing, I really enjoyed the read. I just hope your not going through this *hugs* Andy  |
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