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In Heartbreak's Eternity
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In Heartbreak's Eternity |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IN HEARTBREAK'S ETERNITY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ In heartbreak's eternity I still know your smile, eyes that pierced into me in nights of dark, fingers that touched every way and which, into times space you have left your mark… When cherry blossoms turned to crimson, and the trees sighed when their flowers fell, their bareness would sigh and weep in turn, as I wait and dream of you in heaven and hell… I lie into the dim of ghostly chill and depth, this pillow of cold as you were once of warm, my eyes close in shadows darkness of thought, to reach out in emptiness of a lovers storm… In heartbreak's eternity I still know your smile, eyes that pierced into me in nights of dark, fingers that touched every way and which, into times space you have left your mark… ~~~~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Bill, your words always amaze me.You write with such heart and soul and it shows.This was full of such emotion and imagery that it pulled me right in. Crystal |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some things we just never seem to be able to fully put aside, as a chapter over and done with. Nice writing, Bill. Thanks. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So sad, but maybe there are some things in life we aren't supposed to forget. I think if we could we would. I don't think it's supposed to leave us. Maybe we are supposed to cherish the bad as well as the good, and learn there was something good in all things. Just my thinking?  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I lie into the dim of ghostly chill and depth, this pillow of cold as you were once of warm very good literary genre,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Good one, enjoyed. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely poem even though sad. Thanks for sharing your heart felt words. Bon-Bon  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
When cherry blossoms turned to crimson, and the trees sighed when their flowers fell, their bareness would sigh and weep in turn, as I wait and dream of you in heaven and hell… this one really has really been etched into your soul, it sounds like, for better and for worse romantic and dark ,full of heart and soul |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
In heartbreak's eternity I still know your smile, eyes that pierced into me in nights of dark, fingers that touched every way and which, into times space you have left your mark… Hi Bill, I read this stanza and thought about something someone said to me long ago...which sort of proves his point. He said "we are a part of everyone we have ever known." I was about 15 or 16 years old and this has stuck with me lo these many years. Now some will leave deeper marks than others, but nonetheless everyone impacts us. Your words, my friend, impact me in such a lovely way...more deeply than you will ever know! OK...now I have misty eyes. So, I will say good bye for now. Patricia |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, sometimes it's so darn hard to move on. A sad but wonderfully written piece. Huggles, Marti |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill...deep and thougt filled...giving such an honest touch of love and loss.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"into times space you have left your mark…" ~ as do you with poetry such as this... EA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Bill, how well you have expressed this feeling. I'm with you, I can never forget. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a wonderful write Bill. As painful as it is to miss someone, what a wonderful gift to have known... Some of us are very lucky. TD |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill, this is perfect rhyme - form, everything . . . I adore this xxoo |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill These words certainly leave their mark on my heart. "In heartbreak's eternity I still know your smile, eyes that pierced into me in nights of dark, fingers that touched every way and which, into times space you have left your mark…" Great write. Ariana |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Each reader can feel the passion of your words as they feel heartbreak's eternity...A magnificent write... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, you write with romance and beauty even in the heartbreak.  Hugs Ethel |
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