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Not What The Eye See's |
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Suede Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38Drifting on the soul |
Pregenant with memories love so complete and pure Unquestionable faith essence clutched to reassure Naked to pain isolated in pleasure A thought on the wind unable to measure Feelings of spring clasped the winters storm An undying passion into which i became born Arrival of life on the gentle summer breeze Held together with imagination Not what the eye see's |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suede Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Is anything, ever? Good write.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Very nice entrance suede, one minor correction -Pregnant. nice writing and images throughout welcome to pip |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS This was a terrific write, and I do hope to see more of your work. Please check your e-mail for a special greeting. Tima - Moderator/ Passions In Poetry |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very enjoyable read, Suede. Welcome to Passions. Hope you find many good things to read and ponder here. I look forward to more from your pen (keyboard)  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Suede, this is such a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, your heart sees so much as a poet and may you always find many blessings shine before your eyes forever on, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Suede, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suede, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Strong write to showcase your talents... Looking forward to reading you. ThisDiamond |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Suede . . . Welcome to PIP! I adore this line: pregnant with memories awesome line and nice entrance xxoo |
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