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Follow me (One Last Chance)
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Follow me (One Last Chance) |
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Brigid WillowKeeper Member
since 2003-08-24
Posts 88OHIO IN USA |
Follow me And you will see I am watching over you. Follow me And you will see A heart that is true. You tread a lonley path And you always look back For now things will be easy when you choose to follow me. Through all the lies you will see The truth, it's true, is found in you. Follow me Because I see A heart that is pure. Follow me, And it will be, a simple but big journey. Turn your back on this path And never look back. I'll take you back to your life And show how to see your wife. She loves you, you know it's true, But you need to love her too. Come and see, The life that was you threw it all away. But there will be one last chance. To correct your broken ways. I know you have it in you. For I see you accepted the truth. Return to your home And you will find your love Return to your home And you will find your love This is a song I just now wrote, It really is to the tune of May it Be, I couldn't get that song out of my head whilst writing this. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Very interesting write. Your heart is embedded in your thoughts and words. So...has he returned? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Brigid - the music to this I'm sure is as lovely as the words... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your enchanting name speaks volumes...  Welcome to Passions!Since that tune kept playing in your mind, these "lyrics" begged to be written! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is so sweet. Having faith, and believing in someone is enough to restore them. Such a loving, and kind write. I loved this!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brigid . . . this is absolutely beautiful and quite ironic, I needed to read this today, it echoes my very thoughts . . . A beautiful song indeed . . . thankyou xxoo |
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Brigid WillowKeeper Member
since 2003-08-24
Posts 88OHIO IN USA |
It was about a friend of mine, I am not going into details about the certain incident, though. Though, I just written it, this happened in the past. I learned when a friend is in trouble, and you don't know what to do for them, point them down the right way and send them off with a load of beliving in them and you can only let them find the rest themselves, (accually I learned that lesson from the wizard of oz! lol) |
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