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Once There Was Reason
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Once There Was Reason |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Once There Was Reason Going around in circles The passion is still there I am trying to find words Not getting anywhere Once there was reason It was easier back then You has fed my desires Giving purpose to pen Was I wasting my time I found nothing to write In the grey matter stew Was the end in sight Whats left for me to say You don't already know I hurt from your silence Words cease to flow Hope©2003 |
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Brigid WillowKeeper Member
since 2003-08-24
Posts 88OHIO IN USA |
That is a great peice, it touches on a topic most poems, (that I have read) do not. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If passion is still there, perhaps the reason is merely temporarily veiled... Nice write, Hope...  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - how well these desires are known. In the second verse I believe you meant 'have' instead of 'has'... BC |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Brigid , your comment was much appeciated Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Nan , times like these, yes yearning my muse so to speak Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Bill for your comment and understanding and thank you for spotting the mistake , it was meant to say "You had fed my desires " Hope |
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