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Autumn Breeze
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Autumn Breeze |
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PassionandFun Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 60 |
I love to feel the Autumn breeze as it passes through my soul. All the colors on the trees remind me of my role. I love to make people smile as it does the same for me. Colored bright for a while for all the world to see. I love to love just to love because it feels so right Like a hand sliding in a glove Is there any better sight? And then the breeze stops blowing and I start to lose that feeling Smiles are only temporary And I feel myself reeling... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Smiles are only temporary if you let them fade from your mind, darling.. Great write! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
But it doesn't have to be temporary, just as the seasons come and go, there is always renewal.......wonderful thoughts in your writing, much enjoyed! ~S~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Smiles are only temporary And I feel myself reeling... always something different in each season, if we open to see it. very impressed here, glad you finished it... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write, and yes...I agree with Kaoru on that one, but I do understand what you mean. I echo your thoughts, it is as if our hearts and souls go through the same seasons as nature! Great write, and very much enjoyed! Tima |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
every time you smile, its a gift... and if you look hard enough.. smiles are always found... Wonderful thoughts here.. minoune |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
PassionandFun - the autumn breeze, cool, refreshing, and I'm starting to feel it... BC |
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