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Ever Unsaid
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Ever Unsaid |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Ever Unsaid I hold myself in firm hesitation To not allow heartstrings to strike first chord While I keep this verse of recitation Solemnly silent in my mind’s discord Though I wish for day of celebration To sing melodious ode with proud voice Alas, today brings no incarnation For in a wistful hush, I not rejoice ‘Tis with poignant, painful lamentation That I leave my heart’s orchestra not led No symphony of emancipation When “I love you” remains ever unsaid Release me now thoughts of my lover’s hold So, I may hum his tune of love untold |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you - a sad song, indeed... but with the heart of a poet intertwined... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
When “I love you” remains ever unsaid I've written one or at least two of the "unsaid" poems... felt this way many days M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - I can tell that you would sing a beautiful tune, such as is this poem put to music... BC |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Patricia, A sad song but with a great poetess' heart.Lots of healing hugs  Know the angels are with you and will let your spirit fly and your soul shine again  angelblueyes |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sheesh...This is like the 3rd, or 4th poem in a row that is a heartbreaker. I'm glad I went for those kleenex tissues. Wow...everybody is making me cry. :'( SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia A sad but lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patricia~ This is simply lovely~ I so enjoyed the all of it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh my, the rhyme, the thoughts and emotions are perfect rembrances of a song I don't want to sing any more......but oh did you write it perfectly.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 well, it may be better than having "I love you" said on the first date, ey? *shrugging* just trying to lighten things up...dang, this was a sad one |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is spoken so elegently...with such depth. Excellent. Eric |
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