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deja vu feeling...
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deja vu feeling... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I don't think I can begin to comprehend this looking right through you knock me right off my feet deja vu feeling I could never look anyone straight in the eye without hiding behind castle walls My feelings heavily guarded by more than a fire breathing dragon My insecurities are dealt out on the round table My heart is like The Siege Perilous just calling out your name just waiting for you to take your rightful place Merlin's whispering in my dreams telling me I'm right where I'm supposed to be when I'm looking right through you and when you're looking right through me.... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-24-2003 07:56 PM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i swear, i just replied to this, i did, i hit the submit reply button, ugggg summats up with my computer. anyway, i shall type this again, one of your best Kris, the ending lines really nailed it, stunning images and emotion throughout. always good to read you.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
If I felt coherent enough to speak sense through my stunned-ness, I would. As it is, I'll just echo gemjop. Extremely well done!Kielo I'll never forget you.... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 such sweethearts you are!! thank you so much...always makes me smile and feel better to know I'm atleast good at something  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris . . . smile . . awaken . . . xxoo (beautiful writing as always) Goddddd . . . xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ever have vuja dei? the feeling youve never been here before? ~Robin Williams |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Merlin's whispering in my dreams" ~ How enchanting...  I always enjoy your poetry, Kris! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Much enjoyed this, you have a way with your words. Sandra |
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