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Broken Hearted |
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TrackQueen83 New Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 7Ma |
I fall you'd catch me I cry you'd tell me everythings going to be okay I talk to you, you'd listen I fall again, this time your not here I cry again, your not here to calm me down I try to talk to you, but you’ve moved on already I wish that you understood how much I miss you I look at pictures I don’t know why you let our friendship drift. Every night, I think of you I wonder if you sleeping or out You mean everything to me But you are in your own world now One day you’ll come back You’ll see how hurt I really am I remember having whip cream fights I remember when set off the fire alarm I remember everything about you Where ever we go from this point I hope that you’ll realize How much you mean to me . *~*.Min*~* August 24th, 2003 This is another poem about my friend Sarah I hope that you like it |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It is hard to understand why friends decide to leave a friendship. But sometimes the best you can do is let them know that your heart is still open for them. Good write... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
being so close to someone and then losing them, is a hurt like no other... but don't lose yourself in this... your love can be given again.,., and it will.... and your friend might come back... This was felt deeply by me... i know the hurt you feel... To to find smiles in your every day... This is a wonderful poem... minoune |
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