Open Poetry #28 |
The Misty Mile |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Misty Mile I walked in guile a misty wile And tore apart the old woodpile Looked into the weary deep And rode the river in its sweep And there I found her in the glen Amongst the flowers with the wren Tossing daisy petals high With a face and then a sigh And I became her troubadour With lute and lovely words of lure Sang to her of reminisce That ended in a dreamy kiss I held her in my arms that night While all my troubles passed in flight And though it was a willing wile I did wake up with quite a smile And I’m delighted with the gift That lifts me into heavens drift |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What can I say, Sy...that I'm so pleased when your mists of dream encompass us all? Yes, that's what I can say...good morning, Sy...thanks for starting Sunday off so well. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
And I’m delighted with the gift That lifts me into heavens drift and may you always keep the gift with you, to wherever and whenever..... good sunday to you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good morning my sunshine, have a happy. inkedgoddess It is a free gift for the taking. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I became her troubadour With lute and lovely words of lure ============================== You aint never lied And I’m delighted with the gift That lifts me into heavens drift your rhymes are heaven sent Sy-babes... and Randy......... well.....we know where hes from. LOL You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, The top of the morn to you, my Tinkerbell. I wish you well your lovely dwell. And say hello to Randy too And the biggest kiss for you. WWRS |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I held her in my arms that night While all my troubles passed in flight And though it was a willing wile I did wake up with quite a smile" Morning Sy!! Gotta love waking up with a smile. Inspiration at it's best!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...I'd walk a mile with you anytime, dear Sy... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
An absolute pleasure to read...every word a treasure. Patricia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And I’m delighted with the gift That lifts me into heavens drift Oh Seymour, we are all delighted with your gifts, too. Thank you. Hugs Ethel |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ahhhhhh ... so romantic ... *sigh* always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The things one finds when one looks... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
SY: this is utterly perfect xxoo |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Thanks for the smile, Sey . . . This one is a delight! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh Seymour, where do you find the words? I'm amazed, as always. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
And I with you my dear. Patricia You are a dear. Ethel Hugs back. Janette You are sweet. MARK Ain't that the truth. LOL littlewing And you are utterly delightful. Krawdad Thank you my friend. passing, In the dust of antiquity. LOL :squeeze |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
And I became her troubadour With lute and lovely words of lure Sang to her of reminisce That ended in a dreamy kiss I held her in my arms that night While all my troubles passed in flight And though it was a willing wile I did wake up with quite a smile ================================ beautiful rhymes, Sy...I truly enjoyed this! sp just a hang-up call and the quiet breathing of our persian we call cajun on a wednesday... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
snowpants Than I am delighted. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, to you, this fine summer afternoon! May you be forever gifted with dreams as pleasant as this one was--or was it a dream?...Perhaps that was your true reality, and the visions of your waking hours are in fact, your dreams. Sweet reality, Dear Sonneteer! EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Smiling? Something special must have happened? Well done Sir Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I dreamed I was a butterfly, perhaps I am a butterfly dreaming I am a man. Magnus My friend, thank you so much. |
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