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My Nebulous
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My Nebulous |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Nebulous Nebulous dim, shrouds my mind Like floating in space or being blind I cannot grasp the future or past And from that feeling nothing is cast. I only see the shadows form It has no substance or a norm But still it shades the bright of day And I cannot find my way. Although I have a limits deed I am a plant, a form or seed And would the Vail to lift the dew Even it is the smallest view. Forgive me I do not complain I’ll wear this nebulous of pain And since I can but live and die I would my only question why? So humor me a shadows whim And let me touch and feel the limb. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write n read,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
QjQ Thank you my friend. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"Billions and billions" of relate... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - did you rise this morning with a few aches and pains? Tossed and turned last night? If so, have Randy come pick me up and I shall fly swiftly to your aid. Since Enchantress is hurrying off to her holiday, I will bring along tea with cake just to be on the safe side.  More thoughts to ponder in this read than meets the eye. Thankyou for this. hugs, Chris  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for you...I'll bring the whole tree.. Heck--I'll plant you a forest.   Your nebulous looks marvelous to me. *winkiewinkie*    "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, I can only say, thank you once again. Chris, Thank you love, tea and cake will be fine. JM, You get the first chuckle of the day. LOL And you delight me in every way. WWRS |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I couldn't help but think of the Alzheimer's victim I am helping. There is a lot here, and your "cry" at the end is powerful! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Good comment, thank you. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Somehow I think you handle the worst with the utmost of grace. A gracious man you seem to be. Lovely as always.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-04-2003 11:55 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I only see the shadows form It has no substance or a norm But still it shades the bright of day And I cannot find my way. ~*~  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sir, your words are always crystal-clear. The past and future mean nothing here, only the present is what we enjoy. As always enjoyed! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi, and good day, while reading this I could not help but think of the elders of this country...who are so forgotten and disrespected, yet were the seeds of us...before we were even thought of, and the reasons why we are here....the very soil of our country...our lives...are what they are b/c of them... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Introspective and a bit sad. Can I offer a nod of understanding and a hug?  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I only see the shadows form It has no substance or a norm But still it shades the bright of day And I cannot find my way. I know this place, my friend... and muddling through it isn't fun. *S* But just follow the glow your heart casts... or we'll send out a search party. *S* Excellent write!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I love any poem about shadows... Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SharaRose A lovely compliment, thank you. Sunshine inot2B, A crystal clear answer, thank you. LeeJ, And that is the truth, thank you. Martie Of course, suthern I'll keep my cell phone handy. passing Thank you dear. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"So humor me a shadows whim And let me touch and feel the limb." But, of course... I don't know how I let this one pass by me, but I'm awfully happy to have found it tonight. Wonderful, as always, Sy... "My friends are my estate." |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
.... <3 Sonnets ... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh Sy, you have done it again...this has that magic that you always weave, capturing our imaginations and feeding our insatiable need to read more!!! Wonderful...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes That you would seek me out makes me happy. Skyfyre Thank you my dear. Sunnyone You have brightened my day. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"So humor me a shadows whim And let me touch and feel the limb." ~ If you allow me to return the favor!  Earthy Angel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you EA for bringing this back up... Truly remarkable work! Susan |
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