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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I've seen emptiness before, I see through you blue your eyes, judge like God |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Powerful write.. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh dear ... the judgement of "blue" ... sounds ominous to me. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh God Jason I know those eyes 'cept the ones I know are hazel nice senyru xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yep, Jason you've got this form flowing in your veins now  well done, good write I have hazel eyes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LOL Kacy was talkin bout a man! nice eyes, though * smile* |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Powerful and strong here.You've got this down pat. Crystal |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
too many judges not enough juries |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Beautiful write Jason. Full of candor and simplicity. Although my eyes appear piercing and cold to some, they are merely searching deeply inside others for the truth. [This message has been edited by Gina Culliney (09-05-2003 04:50 PM).] |
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