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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2003-08-04 06:06 AM

there she was
dancing
blending with twilight rays
welcoming the dawn
with an earnest smile

her faint shadows curved
forming spiral silhouettes
as she rode the waves
celebrating with
the dance of the golden dawn

she wore a flowing red dress
with white lacy sleeves
and she had silky black hair
partially eclipsing
her smooth emerald eyes

while all I could do was
stand by the window
dressed in wide-jawed awe
just like the breeze
stilled by the beauty of the sun

what else could I do
for she was
artfully ornamented
with a beautiful smile
and sharp salsa rhythms

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[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (08-04-2003 06:13 AM).]

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-04 07:44 AM

terrific write,,,,

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-08-04 08:16 AM

You took our breath away again, Sudhir. Excellent write.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-08-04 09:22 AM

many different images formed, all beautiful Sudhir.
Nice to read you.

M

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2003-08-04 09:50 AM

A most enticing vision...

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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2003-08-04 11:26 AM

what a view
and I love your "wide-jawed awe"
and her hair eclipsing her eyes
those are fabulous

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-08-04 12:40 PM

WOW, and now we know what you guys are thinkin'..This was a view through eyes that were awed, and admiring from afar. How sweet!!!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2003-08-05 03:19 AM

Thank you all so very much... it is strange how the mind wanders and wavers and how words and lines are formed out of those meandering thoughts... Recently I had been to South Spain and enjoyed the sea and the sand and some salsa music... this I wrote entirely out of imagination... but now I wish I had only seen seen someone dancing the way I imagined

visions?

or apparitions?

anyways, I am rambling on now...

what I meant to say was thank you all for your time and your kind words...

regards
sudhir

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