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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#153 Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon Author’s therapy a steel portal of paradox breaking through everything and ending with nothing but strange poetry You CAN make a difference: |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 makes me wonder why I am even writing... M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
strange can be enlightening  (as it usually is in the case of a Mark V Sheldon post)  [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (08-23-2003 12:24 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, Just like smoking weed. LOL |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Maureen: I know what you mean. That's my intent, Kacy.  Sy:  -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
lol@weed... M - GREAT write, as always! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
strange indeed ... but gosh ... I sure do enjoy it. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Meg -- thank you for the read and encouragement. Janette -- as long as you enjoy it... Thank you for stopping by. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) But isn't that the beauty of poetry? To feel free and to swim as deep into the abyss as you can, only realizing while your intention was to dive for pearls, there is so much more out there that prose was not meant to describe? (big hugggsssssss) I'll tell you...I am zero-tolerant on drugs, alcohol, and smoking, but I can still see such colors, like living with kaleidoscope eyes, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I hear you, Noah: respect yourself and others and expect them to reciprocate while avoiding judgement -- a simple idea, but how many of us live it daily...? -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sometimes strange can be a good thing.It engulfs you and takes you on adventures you never knew of.On the other hand it can have a bad sense that teaches you a life's lesson.In either case you grow and experience the path of which you choose.Well done as always Crystal |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yeow, like this very one! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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RomanticPoet Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 34Florida USA |
Very Interesting; take a few seconds to sink in, then WHAM!!!!, it hits you between the eyes... Very good work.... We Feel,We Write,We learn; We Write More |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Crystal: At the very least, it's... "interesting"... As long as you choose a path and grow -- I guess that's what truly counts... just don't foget to share the wisdom along the way... Ratleader: ...just one example... RomanticPoet: The beauty with these TOL's is that each one is unique to its reader, and the interpretations inherently will be subjective. Sometimes they're dead on with my own intent, and other times, I learn a lot by reading it over through another's fresh perspective which I would never have considered... Thanks for giving it a try... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and what is wrong with strange poetry? i write it all the time...giggle...helen |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
boy...how I needed this reminder and train of thought today...many thanks to the wise author of this poem and also for those who have commented so wisely.... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Helen: It's not what's "wrong" with it; it's what isn't "right" that makes it interesting. LeeJ: Wisdom is to be shared -- otherwise, it would simply be knowledge... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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