Open Poetry #28 |
Tears into a Pillow |
kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
Tears into a Pillow Late at nite, when not a sound can be heard the tears start to fall the soft sobs muffled the tears fall into a pillow no one to see, no one to hear the soft cries nor the tears crying to sleep, the disappointments of the day washed away in the darkness of the nite and the tears that fall softly onto a pillow and when the sun rises and the morning starts No one knows of the tears that fall onto a pillow in the darkness of the night (written aug 18th, 2003) Meesh |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know all about tears...more than I ever wished to have. nice writing M |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Heart-breaking to read. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I haven't read your other posts yet, Meesh. This one is sad, but expresses well an emotional moment many of us understand and have experienced. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I know this one all too well..too often...almost every single night....I'd like to think it all gets better...eventually.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Please know I could feel the pain in this nicely written piece. And please let me welcome you to Passions! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
kaleanna - I know of them. Hope things are well with you... BC |
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