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We Stand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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We Stand We stand in shadows of the past With clouds of future over cast And hope the past could only last But know the future and its fast I often walk the past in time In the fragrance of a rhyme Call upon a phantoms dwell And dip into its wile and well To me the better part of glean With only lovely as the scene And I am happy with the dream For it is pleasant in the seem And this I do more often now It is to me my sacred cow My fantasies of happy nights My Randy and his happy flights And thus I am a butterfly With fields of dreams at every sigh |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We Stand...together. Sy, this is lovely... I'm dusting off a special place in my library for this  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You have an abundant harvest of wonderful dreams, dear Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you sweet.  Nan, I'm loaded with dreams. LOL |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Somehow, the ground was more sound then... I think I know what you mean. A great relate. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, The ground will stay it's the butterfly I worry about. LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my Dear Sweet Sonneteer! I have been saving so much of your fine poetry, that I feel I should be paying you for such a privilege! A book of sonnets by Seymour Tabin would be a best seller!  Love ya! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are an Angel.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'I often walk the past in time In the fragrance of a rhyme' Oh yes ... and we inhale it's purest beauty~ You rock, poet~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you sweet, love you too. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And this I do more often now It is to me my sacred cow My fantasies of happy nights My Randy and his happy flights And thus I am a butterfly With fields of dreams at every sigh ================================== When Randy's happy...we're all happy when Sy sighs the sigh of a contented butterfly... we're all flying high.  love your rhyme scheme dreams Sy-babes... love the poet too You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM Love your loven. WWRS |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
May I add a *sigh* too? Lovely write here. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janette Thank you dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You fly, with or without a butterfly!  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
To me the better part of glean With only lovely as the scene And I am happy with the dream For it is pleasant in the seem Hello, Seymour. I enjoyed very much...as always. Hugs to you, kind Sir Ethel |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
very well done. I will have to check out more of your work as time permits. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie One of my favorite butterflies' Ethel, Thank you sweet. Lisann Thank you so much for the read and reply. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
<In the fragrance of a rhyme Call upon a phantoms dwell And dip into its wile and well>> ================ Hi Sy! I love these lines....I enjoyed the rhymes and cadence in this! Great poem... sp  just a hang-up call and the quiet breathing of our persian we call cajun on a wednesday... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
snowpants Your words make me do a happy dance. |
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