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Our Kiss
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Our Kiss |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 ~~>0<~~ It feels to us like Explosives of bright fireworks Each time our lips touch From deep within us An electrical feeling Of sparks igniting A heavenly touch Going from our heads to toes Each time our lips touch ~~>0<~~  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-23-2003 02:51 AM).] |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
So that's how it's supposed to go? I'll keep that in mind.  Well done, once again.  Kielo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sounds nice, now if only I could find one who doesn't set me on fire, quite.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Our romantic lady of pip has penned another romantic beautiful write,,, |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
And may those explosive kisses light your love for the rest of your days, dear friend!!! How I do enjoy reading you, because you have a happiness that shines through every line.......~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sizzling...............and yummy |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ohh mann , I remember this, and there is NOTHING like that kiss NOTHING Beautiful Ethel . . . thank you for the gentle reminder xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ethel, I dream so much of having my first kiss with that special someone, sweet friend, it must be the most beautiful feeling in the world! (kiss on cheek) This is heavenly, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Definitely my favorite kind of explosives! Enjoyed! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
very cute ethel, what man wouldn't want to read this??? write like you just write like you |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
That first kiss is...for lack of better words...WONDERFUL! But, the secret lies in still feeling the fireworks after a hundred of those kisses with the same man (or woman). Then it's not just one explosive, but an entire show that will hopefully stand the test of time! Wonderful write Ethel! Tima |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like you got a hot one...James |
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