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Wa Wa Wa....Watching (Part 2)
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Wa Wa Wa....Watching (Part 2) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Ser. you made me do this..... Legs moves away as I sit, dumbfounded, blubbering like a prepubescent boy. Sheesh, what was so complicated about that maneuver. Talk about getting one upped.....or was it two upped? The fragrance I detected, White Shoulders.....melting me into the cushion. A short memory jaunt back to yesterday, or was that yestercentury? The hiss of door opening, jarring me back into present tense and time. Where was she? Walking out the door of the train, looking up and down the corridor, seeing a single calf round a corner, AH YES, that must be her. Running, shucking the laptop, the briefcase, need more speed. Who needs a computer anyway? Turning the corner to see those legs disappear into the Ladies Room. Nahuh, not going there.... Patiently....nix that....pacing, waiting for her return. Women and bathrooms......a man’s worst enemy. What could they possibly do in there for 15 minutes. There is only so much skin that can be powdered. Glancing around.....hmmmm, my other smiling friend from the who is watching who ride. Standing there idly watching me, waiting to see what my next move will be. What would she do if I smiled back? Take a chance.....or wait on the twin skyscrapers of silk to re-appear from within the confines of Alcatraz, the Ladies Room. Suddenly, from behind me, a gentle tap upon my shoulder as the once again familiar scent of WS tweaks my nostrils... “Looking for me?” Legs says ...... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WHOOOOHOOO!!! "Looking for me?" I tell ya...it's the White Shoulders... gets them every time!! WAY TO GO BARRY!!! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You are full of the dickens tonight, aren't you? OK, Bud...are we looking at a Part 3 any time soon? You are making me smile tonight. Patricia |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Suddenly, from behind me, a gentle tap upon my shoulder as the once again familiar scent of WS tweaks my nostrils... “Looking for me?” Legs says ...... Okay, where's the next part??  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahahaha nice extension of the first one Barry . . . *smile* so . . . I take it you had a nice trip then? lol xxoo |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Oh! The sweet aroma of White Shoulders will get you every time. Good one. Bon-Bon  |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
WHOOOO you lookin' at???  This is excellent, Sir P.I. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I use to wear White Shoulders ... sheesh ... maybe I should go out and buy a gallon of it. Fascinating read here, I truly enjoyed it! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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