Open Poetry #28 |
Nonsense |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
My head remains the same eyes, mouth, ears What I hear, the things I say about all the things you won't let me see . remains . the . same . for that reason Through every sense that can make none of this all you remain the same realising I miss you regardless of every nerve ending failure. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
realising I miss you regardless of every nerve ending failure. oh yea, good stuff, final remnants that cant be burned off Instant karma's gonna get you.- it always does, it seems, doesnt it? gets us all though, if thats some consolation |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
heh heh heh. I'm here blue. THIS WAS GREAT. oh yeah. it is mine and you can't do anything about it. phhlt Instant Karma's gonna get you Gonna knock you right on the head You better get yourself together karma police, arrest this girl her hitler hairdo is making me feel ill. and we have crashed her party Excuse me. thank you very much insanity is not a crime [This message has been edited by Wind (08-22-2003 07:41 PM).] |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Well done. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful, and true..so true. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
now I have Instant Karma in my head...I feel like knocking someone right on their...umrph....ohh yeah sorry enjoyed the write... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*nod* I'd say it makes sense, but I understand it too well to say something like that.... Kielo wounded and broken and hurting.... what scares me is that I'm starting to just not care, except that I wish I could cry the pain away.... |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
regardless Yep, I have known that feeling, too. You are sooooo good at expressing these kinds of emotions ... WOW always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Through every sense that can make none of this all you remain the same realising I miss you regardless of every nerve ending failure. Gemma..... (did that help? I hope so!!) Ethel Mae |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OH MY GOD completely gem xxoo |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"regardless of every nerve ending failure." Nice finish. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
artificial sweetners often have a little bitter aftertaste.... a spoonful of sugar to you gem |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Nonesense sounds better than being totally senseless Chin up and keep your smile burning that makes the most sense! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Damn you women you rock..which is amazing considering you're wankishness |
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