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signs, omens, and illusionary projections
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signs, omens, and illusionary projections |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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watch the shadow in the wood hear a twig in warning snap the eyes are following the breeze smell the rain? the lack of wing underscores the time... gust--a dervish dancing dust voices know this lark of leaves druids chanting doors unlocked dread is just the certainty of the silent whispering longing for the sanity now undertow beneath this squall. too late, too late-- the sky is low too late, too late-- the birds have flown harness lightning chariot as the heavens drip with blood captured now within the cup-- awaiting blessing of the word. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"dread is just the certainty of the silent whispering longing for the sanity now undertow beneath this squall. Oh...you've gotta know I feel this one. Hugs, you...  "My friends are my estate." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Okay...you know you had me from the title.  Love this..gawd wish I could write like this! Love ya lady! ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"now within the cup-- awaiting blessing of the word." Lift a stone and I am there; spilt a piece of wood and you will find me. *smile* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity Could feel the ions touch, the ache for storm here has been too much! Thank you. |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
This was so magical and mysterious "...as the heavens drip with blood..." I really liked that line.. ~Talia |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
hmmmm...did you know its storming here...actually started to thunder & stuff as soon as I clicked on your poem....how'd yanno??? Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-22-2003 07:24 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ahem. you are the greatest person alive.  my library is hungry. this should fill it for a while insanity is not a crime |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
forgot to press the button.  insanity is not a crime |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
gust--a dervish dancing dust voices know this lark of leaves druids chanting doors unlocked dread is just the certainty of the silent whispering longing for the sanity now undertow beneath this squall. Where do these amazing words and thoughts come from? How do you do this time after time? Where am I? luv ya Karen! Chris[This message has been edited by Nightshade (08-22-2003 07:59 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all. I have to thank the two Rons for inspiration here--so now I do. Cap? awesome YOU... and Ron, I hope to greet storms with a free-er heart in the future. Thanks all...I blush. (blame the blush on Brian....) Things just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity...Amazing...Do you give lessons? I could pay you with??? I'll come up with something, maybe...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
gust--a dervish dancing dust voices know this lark of leaves druids chanting doors unlocked dread is just the certainty of the silent whispering longing for the sanity Serenity, the sane one! Do you know how good your words feel? I am so there!  |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
It's almost as amazing as you! I'm so glad Ron likes storms.... Kielo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"too late, too late-- the sky is low too late, too late-- the birds have flown harness lightning chariot as the heavens drip with blood captured now within the cup-- awaiting blessing of the word." Woah woah woooooah now.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"gust--a dervish dancing dust voices know this lark of leaves druids chanting"...   EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
gust--a dervish dancing dust voices know this lark of leaves druids chanting doors unlocked dread is just the certainty of the silent whispering longing for the sanity now undertow beneath this squall. ================================== this is beautiful KA ... haunting and incanting...just like you ( no squall can do a candle dance) You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name ... and know my love and my desperation were one and the same. JB [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (08-23-2003 06:45 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
so you are the one that made me jump out my head at 3 am with that bolt of lightning! All you had to do was buzz me . . . lol *smile* A beautiful tribute to two very special men from one extremely amazing Lady well done Karen xxoo |
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