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Perfect Rain |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
What i try with a downpour You say in drop upon drop till I'm drowning in your perfect rain [This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (08-22-2003 03:22 PM).] |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
wow. i'm consistantly impressed by your works. great metaphor, i love it! wow . . . can't really say much else and tell the truth. just wow.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Poetic perfect Robert! This is a treasure for my library. ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Love the metaphor you use here.You are a talented poet. Crystal |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...and, you did it in Twenty Or Less!!  ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So refreshing, this... now please... do it again. And dance that rain dance this way, Robert... we need it so much! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice 20 or less, enjoyed the penning,,, |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"twenty or less"...and to think i wasn't even trying! thanks for kind words! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Robert, I do believe you just rained a downpour--drop by drop! Your soft rain spoke volumes!   Linda |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
seems you distilled this to an essence...and indeed have something that holds its proof quite well.. a gentle smooth burn that warms as it goes down... nicely done sir.. nicely done indeed. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...some have perfect rain, and some have a perfect way of describing it... ~K~ |
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