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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-08-04 01:29 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#133

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


When hulking beliefs fly
unfairly
destroying mistletoe


I will wait


and instill love


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-08-04 01:55 AM


This just rings out "patience." Just beautiful!!!!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kahlil
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2 posted 2003-08-04 02:03 AM


Oh! This is so sweet!  ~K~
QjQ
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3 posted 2003-08-04 02:27 AM


very good,,,,,
Jason Lyle
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4 posted 2003-08-04 03:23 AM


Short and sweet...enjoyed.

Jason

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-08-04 05:11 AM


beautiful
Ericc
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6 posted 2003-08-04 07:33 AM


Beautiful.
Eric

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2003-08-04 07:38 AM


I will wait

and instill love
-----------

sounds so devotional ...

nice work, Mark...

regards
sudhir

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2003-08-04 09:17 AM


Well Santa prevail?
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-08-04 09:19 AM


hmmm...brought out one of those  half smiles from me.


M

angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-08-04 11:28 AM


You made me smile this mmorning.Thanks
angelblueyes

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-08-04 11:40 AM


MARK,
A lovely bouquet.

LeeJ
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12 posted 2003-08-04 12:46 PM


talk about patience...dedication and virtue...this one's a winner...and so is your heart...lovely write...liked a lot.
MARK V SHELDON
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13 posted 2003-08-04 09:08 PM


SharaRose:  Yes, patience...  time invested instead of wasted...?

Kahlil:  Thank you.

Thanks for the read, Q.

Thanks for enjoying and sharing, Jason.

Passing Shadows:  ...a welcome description -- thank you.

Thanks, Eric.

Sudhir:  ...a disappearing quality, nowadays...

Kacy:  Santa's hired the postal service this year.

Maureen:  ...then it was worth the write.

Crystal:  I imagine it suits you well.  Thank you.

Sy:  Never had it described like that, but smells good to me!  Thank you, Sir.

LeeJ, thank you kindly.  I look forward to more of your contemplations.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-08-04 11:04 PM


Ah, an instiller of love--and not a destroyer of it! --and one with the patience of Job!


EA

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15 posted 2003-08-05 12:25 PM


You know, Mark, patience is a
nice thing to have. I like this
poem.  
Hugs  
Ethel

MARK V SHELDON
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16 posted 2003-08-06 01:55 AM


EA:  I try...

Ethel:  Indeed, patience is essential though not always immediate...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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