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Open Poetry #28

Tears

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

0 posted 2003-08-22 12:01 PM

You take my heart
and rip it out
leave tears streaming
down my face again

My heart is broken
just like always
even though you swore
you never could do

I've learned to trust
not a soul on this earth
my future looks bleak
but I'm too hurt to care

What really kills me
is one burning question
are you even aware and
do you even notice tears

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-08-22 12:02 PM

I feel your sadness and despair in this.I hope whoever this is can learn to shine and trust again.For it shows a beautiful heart and a wondrous spirit that the world needs to see

Crystal

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-08-22 12:35 PM

nice

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-08-22 12:58 PM

ahh Kristie, you know they are aware - for some odd reason they dont see it as we do all the time or they hide it.
Beautiful writing
xxoo

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