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Open Poetry #28

Near the Passing Clouds

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-08-22 07:22 AM

Clouds drift across the sky caught by mountains reaching high
White congregations gray and darken more as they stay,
Snared in place they then cry making for a rainy day.

Gloom

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-08-22 08:09 AM

Hi Prof, and just wanted to tell you that you hit upon one of my favorite hobbies here...watching the clouds. This poem made me realize I hadn't done that in a while, so thank you!!! Quite enjoyed the read, too! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-08-22 09:31 AM

We layed outside last night on the trampoline watching the clouds and stars. You've written well here

Crystal

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-08-22 09:34 AM

awesome...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-08-22 10:27 AM

hmm..rainy days...

Very nicely done!

Susan

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