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Sun of faith
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0 posted 2003-08-22 05:14 AM


I belong to no-one but myself,
I will hault all crawling for your approval,
You have nothing of mine,
Not even my hatred,
Why did I even bother?
This I will never know.
But there is much importance that i do know,
That is to never fall again.
For I have hit the bottom of your trap,
I have climbed out and run away.
You dont deserve a glance back from me,
You dont deserve anything of mine,
And to think I loved you was a joke.
I Have found!
And I have been found!
You are nothing, I am something,
And happiness has surrounded me!
I love! And Im LOVED!


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-08-22 05:16 AM


You Go! This is Power-Packed!
Sun of faith
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2 posted 2003-08-23 12:23 PM


thanx, i was going for a power sorta thing with this
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
3 posted 2003-08-27 12:34 PM


Great poem, glad to see within this poem that happiness was the final outcome.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



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