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Open Poetry #28

I Didn't Care

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-08-21 11:10 PM

I didn't care...
just wanted to walk along
the side of scenic road
wanted to hold your hand...
sit, and watch the sunlight
glitter through the trees
talk about nothing,everything
anything
I didnt't care...
I was with you
on a beautiful day
I don't think you realize
how much I appreciated you
just having you there...
listening to me ramble
the fact that you stayed
and walked
and noticed
I didn't care...
when you left me
just the fact that I had that day
my memory

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2003-08-22 02:05 AM

This felt real and I admire that.

-MVS

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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-08-22 06:25 PM

Talia~

'talk about nothing, everything
anything'

Oh yes ... I've lived this moment-of-gentle-remember~

WONDERFULLY PENNED~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-08-22 08:39 PM

I love it when that happens. What a special memory. ~K~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-08-22 09:07 PM

was with you
on a beautiful day
I don't think you realize
how much I appreciated you
just having you there...
listening to me ramble

i love it,
when they can listen to the dribble,
and not run away

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2003-08-22 09:13 PM

it'd be nice to finally find someone who would listen to me ramble..maybe next time it'd be more than a memory?? *sigh* wonder if it exists anyways??

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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