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peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-08-21 10:01 PM

All I can manage to feel is my heart ache,
Reaching out for the nothing that's there,
To the point of straining,
Illness has taken over my emotions,
I can't lose you,
It's an end to a new begining,
Losing everything I've achieved and more,
My eyes will lay nowhere else than on you,
Focused, you fill the void,
I assume you're in a deep sleep,
While I'm lying awake thinking of you,
All I can feel is my heart ache,
Reaching out for the nothing that's there.

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-08-21 10:17 PM

You write from an achingly lonely place in your heart--and have done it very well.

Lovin' healin' hugs,
EA

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-08-21 10:18 PM

I feel the longing and the aching in ths.Well written from within.
Crystal

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-21 10:46 PM

I have know this feeling very well. This describes my past with guys. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-08-22 11:26 AM

Aching, yes...but when you become a nothing, lots of us will be in minus territory....

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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2003-09-16 08:51 PM

I liked this a lot Jess. I liked your use of vocabulary on this one. Good write.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-09-16 09:03 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is very heartaching, dearest friend, my heart sends angel hugs your way, and for this brand new ending a new beginning emerge, God Bless You, we all send angel healing hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jessica, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-09-16 10:01 PM

I hope it's better for you than it was for my Peaches..... /pip/Forum79/HTML/000439.html

and probably will be, because you're a good writer, who can express the feel of it.

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SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-09-16 11:13 PM

Peaches...here's a hand to squeeze \\//, (closest thing I could think of for 4 fingers, and a thumb) and

I hope it gets better for you very soon. Find comfort in prayer.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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