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Open Poetry #28

Into My Soul

GeorgiaPaver
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 15
Savannah, GA

0 posted 2003-08-04 12:25 PM

Into my soul, your's is forever bound
Around my heart, you love is wound
Into my memory, you name is etched
In my mind, our future is sketched

Around my body, your arms are wrapped
Against my lips, your's are trapped
Against my tounge, your's is gently pressed
Inside my hands, your fingers gently caress

Inside my ears, your sweetness sings
In my sight, two golden rings
In my life, our love forever
In our life, love we never sever...

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

1 posted 2003-08-04 12:27 PM

Georgia,

This is a beautiful poem. Take Care.

~Laura~

scuffedshoe2
Junior Member

since 2003-08-04

Posts 39

2 posted 2003-08-04 12:28 PM

I didn't think the poem was to bad. It painted a clear picture, and made me smile, becuase right now i have a major crush on a girl, and this totally tapped into how i was feeling.

later
-Ian

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-08-04 12:36 PM

Such devotion that's shared. The things dreams are made of. Never lose that. Treasure it forever. Lovely.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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