Open Poetry #28 |
Splitting Airs |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The air that we breathe is cold in stride hot with humility and lacking pride And I take it, in trying to ease you only exhale wanting please Before what is left draws on its last ... decisions be made, splitting the past Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
okay, im going to be nice now................ |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great write, dont mind Michelle, she hates self-abuse. Jason |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Very good write. Crystal |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just keep dancing |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I enjoy your style of writing. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
And I take it, in trying to ease you only exhale wanting please I'm going to think on that one, and read all kinds of things into it! Nicely penned Craig |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well done....it doesn't take a lot of words to reach the deepest places, if they're the right ones. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
waiting to exhale'' ME~ The way you move me |
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