Open Poetry #28 |
A Child for Karelanne |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Twenty Six years of joy, of life this love chosen to be his bride. Premature, tiny by midwife, a father beaming by her side. Flowing tresses of auburn hue, shimmering eyes of soft greenish gold. Lips that tasted of honey due, such a treasure to keep, to hold. Walks in the morn for a bouquet. Giggles echoing among giant trees. Laughing, living, a woman’s way. Such a sight to be seen and pleased. Carried a child, he did not know. A newborn babe expected soon. The swell she hid, it did not show. From that one night beneath the moon. The pains that came one night alone before the time of birth was due. No friends nearby, without a phone. He was not there to help her through. The child was born but would not cry a tiny face once pale now blue. She spanked his feet, please do not die. This babe lay still, the angels flew. A breath they gave upon his lips to bring to life this chosen child. A heart now beat in tiny skips, his mother cried, the angels smiled. [This message has been edited by Magnus (08-21-2003 08:35 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pretty then...pretty now... but why the ###? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...but I was wondering the same thing as Karilea. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A very touching write, Barry. I had to read this one aloud to my older daughter who enjoyed it as well. Hmmm...I was wondering about the #### too. Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Barry, I am keeping this ok? You brought me down and brought me back up again and yes, the angels . . . beautiful xxoo |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Beautifully moving. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very touching, dear Barry! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
beats me about the ########..... self Censored? NOT! Thanx all....goood catch on YOUR parts.... DUHHHHHHHH |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Patricia for the TRIPLE post..... Way to go girl!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You write so beautifully Barry. left me sighing... and that was without the benefit of the ####. Enjoyed this much. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I enjoyed this one very much. Crystal |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
So sweet and lovely... Susan |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...Patricia asked me to clean up her spill, Magnus... so it gave me the opportunity to read this again...bless her heart! |
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