Open Poetry #28 |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
I sit here feeling used, emotionally abused Sometimes I feel like all I'm good for is my money I try to help people and get ridiculed in return At times I hurt so bad, I feel like I burn I don't think people have realized what has happened to me, I'm dying inside you see I tried so hard, for what?for nothing I haave received nothing in return |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
:'( There are people out there that love just to feel the love come back. Keep trying. Sending SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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scuffedshoe2 Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 39 |
This is a great poem! Everyone feels like this at leaste once in their lives. People suck! -Ian |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Shara, I will keep trying. Thanks, for your reply. Ian, Not all people suck. One just has to watch out for the sucky ones. lol Thanks for reading, i'm glad you enjoyed it. Take Care, ~Laura~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Yeah people can suck at times for sure. I know that not everyone does. I hope you meet up with some cool people soon, Laura. ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ParisGrl Expect nothing in return and you will be happy. Enjoyed the read. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
The only reward for having done good is having done it. That others would abuse it is to their own detriment. Keep writing and growing Laura |
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