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A Whisper’s Caress |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
deep sigh eyes closed love found me flicker of hope reason suspends heart beating passion astounds me tracing of lips with shaking fingertips fulfilling dreams around me |
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Toad Member
since 2002-06-16
Posts 161 |
Conveying a message clearly in a poem, or any form of communication for that matter, gets exponentially harder as you use less and less words. You’ve managed to do it superbly here with less than thirty. Thanks for the chance to read and reply |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Softly sensual...much enjoyed. ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this feeling, wish to have it back some day~ *s M |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully expressed Ms deVine.  Maree fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows (Ani DiFranco) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (08-21-2003 05:37 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, lady... I love the title... and the poem fulfilled its promise. *S* Beautiful! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Wonderfully expressed in such few words. Crystal |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful Sharon . . . tracing of lips with shaking fingertips nice imagery xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
flicker of hope reason suspends heart beating passion astounds me Uh-huh!!Very good writing!  Hugs Ethel |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*smile* You're good.  (Don't worry, I'm understating). I like it a lot! Kielo wounded and broken and hurting.... what scares me is that I'm starting to just not care, except that I wish I could cry the pain away.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"tracing of lips with shaking fingertips fulfilling dreams around me" ~ Sounds like a devine way to spend an evening! I truly enjoy your sensual writes! To life and loving! EA |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautifully penned, sweets.. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mmmm.....a sensual delight....love your style, PdV!!!! ~S~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, PdV - I particularly like your second stanza - It pretty much says it all... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh, this is so good. Few words spoke volumes. Love it! Patricia |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for reading my little poem. I'm so glad you like it!  |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Aye, lass... this be a good one. lucky dale |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
love found you..and your muse! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
An incredibly beautiful love poem. Enjoyed this immensely. ***Ivy Rose |
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