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Fields of Clover
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Fields of Clover |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Fields of Clover A field of clover touched with weed Has met my eyes my sprout of seed Has woven threads of wedding band A shawl of cover strand by strand And in the shroud I am enmeshed Bone by bone and all my flesh The entire of heart and mind Of agony and the kind My flower bloomed in subtle tones Subdued in a field of clones Yet some were plucked for show and tell And I was left beside the well My cheeks have felt the kiss of wile In fantasy with knights of style Wore the favor of fair maid The fairest fair within the glade And I am happy with this dove Her lovely grace and coo of love |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm sorry I've been absent from reading for a while, but I'm sure glad I got a chance to read your wonderful rhymes this morning, Sy.  You are still making me smile in the early morning hours with lovely words such as these.  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit You are one of my most beautiful butterflies.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Dear Sonneteer! This is one of the loveliest sonnets of love that I have ever had the pleasure of reading! If Isabel ever gets tired of you--NOT!--I'll be standing in the wings!   EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, if I bring tea may I get in line to be one of your lovely butterflies? Much enjoyed this lovely sonnet. ~Morning Hugs & Tea, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You're on stage as far as I'm concerned. Nancy, Didn't I mention it? You are one of my prettiest butterflies. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your fields of clover smell good too! Good morning, Sy!!! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So pretty...always a delight...  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
~ ~ nicely penned ~ ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good morning butterfly. SharaRose Thank you sweet. QjQ, Thank you for the nicely. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My flower bloomed in subtle tones But don't you know, dear friend? *S* Many prefer a lasting beauty to a brief show of bright color. *S* I'd say you bloom in just the right colors. *S* Beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweet. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'woven threads of wedding band A shawl of cover strand by strand' That is a poetically beautiful thought~ You pen so tenderly~ Beautiful, poet ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you my dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Just lovely! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjour your read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Once again, vandana Thank you my dear. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - fields of a meadow filled with clover for a morning read... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A field of clover touched with weed Has met my eyes my sprout of seed Has woven threads of wedding band A shawl of cover strand by strand And in the shroud I am enmeshed Bone by bone and all my flesh The entire of heart and mind Of agony and the kind =============================== My cheeks have felt the kiss of wile In fantasy with knights of style Wore the favor of fair maid The fairest fair within the glade ================================= Oh and those are the choicest of cheekie cheeks too Cheekie cheeks to go with winkie winks LOL  Has woven threads of wedding band A shawl of cover strand by strand could that couplet be any cooler????? you are poetry sweet Sy--pure poetry. *ww*  [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (08-21-2003 11:23 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Thank you my friend. JM, Thank you Tink, I think about you all the time, Read tomorows poem, Fishing. WWRS |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good morning dear Sy ... how fortunate your wife is to have such a special and loving hubby! Hugs, Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LOL I'll tell her that. |
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