Inhabitence Of A Sea Shell

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Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-08-21 05:02 AM

early morning inspiration
sleep will not come for a visitation
secluded inner thoughts
guarded fiercly by crab shell
curled up tight,hard as a rock
I can't say much at this time
I'm afriad of the truth
I'm afraid that if I have patience,
what if it doesn't work out anyway?
what if my time im wasting?
I feel that if I had a million years
that I could not accomplish
everything I wanted,
my debilitating fear
would drive me into hiding
back in my dark,quiet place
never revealing my true face
would it be shame
not to truly see...me?

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-08-21 07:33 AM

It would.

but its hard isnt it, not to hide away when the whole world is going wrong.

nice write gal.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-08-21 11:37 PM

Talia long time no see
and yes . . . a huge shame
I often want to crawl and
do into my own shell when
the wind starts whipping
missed you here
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-22 05:03 AM

wow!

yes!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2003-08-22 08:16 AM

Yes, it would be a huge shame, because from what I see here, the rest of us would be missing seeing you and your talents, too!! Wonderful write, my friend, and stay away from that shell, ok? ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-08-22 06:14 PM

Talia~

''I can't say much at this time
I'm afriad of the truth
I'm afraid that if I have patience,
what if it doesn't work out anyway?'

Oh ... have some of us ever felt this way~
Truth in the penning~
I'm greatly enjoying the refreshment of your verse~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

6 posted 2003-08-22 11:00 PM

...every time you emerge, you learn a little more...
...so, yes, it would be a shame not to truly see yourself. I think you do see, just by writing this. You are so creative! ~K~

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

7 posted 2003-09-25 09:21 PM

hello i say to you
i like this the title works well with it.
i have you feel better and keep righting.
ahhh bu bye

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