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Inhabitence Of A Sea Shell
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Inhabitence Of A Sea Shell |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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early morning inspiration sleep will not come for a visitation secluded inner thoughts guarded fiercly by crab shell curled up tight,hard as a rock I can't say much at this time I'm afriad of the truth I'm afraid that if I have patience, what if it doesn't work out anyway? what if my time im wasting? I feel that if I had a million years that I could not accomplish everything I wanted, my debilitating fear would drive me into hiding back in my dark,quiet place never revealing my true face would it be shame not to truly see...me? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
It would.  but its hard isnt it, not to hide away when the whole world is going wrong. nice write gal. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Talia long time no see and yes . . . a huge shame I often want to crawl and do into my own shell when the wind starts whipping missed you here xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! yes! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes, it would be a huge shame, because from what I see here, the rest of us would be missing seeing you and your talents, too!! Wonderful write, my friend, and stay away from that shell, ok? ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Talia~ ''I can't say much at this time I'm afriad of the truth I'm afraid that if I have patience, what if it doesn't work out anyway?' Oh ... have some of us ever felt this way~ Truth in the penning~ I'm greatly enjoying the refreshment of your verse~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...every time you emerge, you learn a little more... ...so, yes, it would be a shame not to truly see yourself. I think you do see, just by writing this. You are so creative! ~K~ |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
hello i say to you i like this the title works well with it. i have you feel better and keep righting. ahhh bu bye |
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