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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-08-21 02:25 AM


                        Each Day  



                        For want
                        of a lover’s
                        unquestioning
                        respect,
  
                        Each day
                        I try to
                        give myself the
                        hope that in
                        time I will
                        enjoy an
                        evening of
                        no regrets







                              ©  081803



© Copyright 2003 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
JilGirl
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1 posted 2003-08-21 02:31 AM


Seize the moment!
Grab that evening NOW!
It's YOURS, you know?

Mighty fine write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-08-21 02:35 AM


you will...you KNOW you will.
idonthaveaname
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3 posted 2003-08-21 03:15 AM


very very good!
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-08-21 06:13 AM



Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-08-21 08:46 AM


I think we all feel this way..
at some time or another.
Wanting unquestioning respect...
and unconditional love.
Enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-08-21 08:50 AM


Krawdad
May it be so.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-08-21 08:56 AM


I understand that state of mind. It can be a very lonely place to be.

Wishing for you, what you so desire,
EA


Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2003-08-21 09:55 AM


Krawdad,

Same thing I wish for, and look for...sigh.

Nicely written.

Susan

gemjop
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9 posted 2003-08-21 09:59 AM


Oh my...a keeper...that echoes in my head.

excellent words sir.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Martie
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10 posted 2003-08-21 10:24 AM


Krawdad

It doesn't seem like too much to ask for, but still it's hard to find.  Enjoyed the universal feeling of this, and yet also so personal.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2003-08-21 10:27 AM


perfect...

my thoughts exactly
*s
M

vandana
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12 posted 2003-08-21 10:41 AM


nice write
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
13 posted 2003-08-21 11:18 AM


Krawdad - and may those evenings be many...

BC

Krawdad
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14 posted 2003-08-22 10:31 AM


Thank you all for your kind remarks and thoughts.

Kraw'

dgvarner
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15 posted 2003-09-14 10:47 AM


I've found it!  May you find it too...!!  

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

garysgirl
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16 posted 2003-09-14 10:58 AM


Krawdad, I'm glad this resurfaced. I would have probably missed it otherwise. It is a very good write. You always feel up the page with your thoughts, no matter how few your words are. You make use of every word.
Hugs  
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
17 posted 2003-09-14 11:11 AM


were those your thoughts..or did you take those words right out of my mouth..hmmm

had to respond again.

M

Krawdad
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18 posted 2003-09-23 12:48 PM


dg,
I'm so glad you did, so glad you did.
I'm happy for you!

Ethel,
Such an interesting repy, intended or not?
Either way, thanks for the compliment.

M,
And thanks again.
Perhaps one day . . .

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