Riding on the Edge of the World

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Open Poetry #28

Riding on the Edge of the World

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-20 11:43 PM

Let's dance
on the
edge
of the world..

Gun in my pocket
I'll never use it
but the silver
it attracts me

the phantom
of the bullet.

you were looking
for
a
"hard headed woman"..

To touch the end,
mirror waves
upon the
sky..

a velvet scream
saftey
net..

gypsy fortune
skirts of color in the wind.

sleeping
in cathedrals
echo stained glass..

This too
shall pass...
this too shall
pass.

You mock gunfire
gunslinger..
satin and laced
fingertips..

you've touched my
forehead.

and said,
"you're better off
than being dead.."

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-08-20 11:46 PM

WOW!!!I loved this.The style, the flow, and the form are wonderful.
Crystal

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-08-21 01:04 AM

Kaoru - excellent write...

BC

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-08-21 01:29 AM

Much enjoyed!
Great write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

4 posted 2003-08-21 01:33 AM

Yes, Let's . . .
Poets belong on the edge of the world.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-08-21 08:10 AM

wow, the images, one of your best.

stunned.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

SuperGlueRyan
Junior Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 45
Possum Kingdom

6 posted 2003-08-21 10:47 AM

Absolutely fantastic.

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