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a picture of lonely (people watching challenge)
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a picture of lonely (people watching challenge) |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
a picture of lonely painted in a park minding his bench daylight to dark a hand-carved cane and a bag full of seeds tending his birds mindful of greed it’s duty you see they all need a share someone must watch someone must care |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I truly enjoyed this and you met the challenge head on  angelblueyes |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"someone must care" ---and from this write it is apparent that you are one of the "someone"s who care!!!   EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How beautiful it is to picture this. You are such a caring soul Edder~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is touching...to my heart |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
~Hugs~ I love you, Eddles. I liked this alot.  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ah crap...now I am going to spend the day worrying about the frogs and the old men on park benches...geez /pip/Forum81/HTML/001313.html Beautifully done... Susan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Edder I've seen this before, and it is a sweet picture still in this poem. You captured this person, and a bit of lonesome too. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you... wonderful answer to the challenge! I've seen this guy, and now I have a forever picture of him. Thank you lovie! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed - I know him too . . . you have such a sweet heart, m'friend this is lovely well met indeed xxoo |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
loner- thanks for the read, glad you enjoyed angel- thank you for reading me Linda- it's tough being a softie  but somebody's gotta do itBlues- always a pleasure to see you here and thank you so much. Dixie- thank you, a grand compliment indeed Lauren- thanks for stopping by, i've missed you something awful! luv ya Susan- sorry *S* that makes two of us Martie- thank you so much Karen- thanks for the push...i need it sometimes Sue- thank you, dear. glad you enjoyed |
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