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vandana
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0 posted 2003-08-20 07:14 PM



When Iam low
You wash my tears
And take me
through the night
The loneliness
The emptiness
I have
Washes away
In the deepest emotions
Through the night
I surive
When you tell me
Iam only the one
When Iam lost
You shine a light for me
and set me free
You cast my fears away
When you tell me
Iam the only one
you need
sweet and tenderly
And yoyr love seems so
sweet
When you tell me
through my ears
How much you love me
When I fell in love with you
I fell so deep so deep for you
Your love Is strong enough
to lift me up
How this love grows
Day by day
You love me tenderly
As I fell you something
sweet and tenderly
I feel alright
Now
Day by day
Want to give you all
my love
Now and forever
my love
All I have love to give you



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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-20 07:23 PM


beautiful thoughts expressed,,,

     


gemjop
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2 posted 2003-08-20 08:42 PM


Vandana, those people who lift us, are soooooo special aren't they?

lovely write! xx

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-08-20 10:00 PM


vandana - wonderfully written thoughts, he'll like this for sure...

BC

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-08-26 09:40 PM


Silky words spilled upon the page...James
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5 posted 2003-08-26 11:07 PM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I believe there is always a right time to fall, for not every fall is painful but can be like lying on air! (kiss on cheek) I am so happy for you, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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