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symphony_of_thoughts
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Somewhere

0 posted 2003-08-20 06:06 PM



Swooping down to catch my breath
Held in midair I dare not look down
My arms and legs dangling in the limbo
Swiftly taking me on a ride to nowhere
I dare not look down, for fear of falling

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-20 10:11 PM


very nice penning,,,

     


angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-21 12:07 PM


Nice write.
Crystal

JilGirl
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3 posted 2003-08-21 01:56 AM


The perfect place to listen to that "music"!
Fine write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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