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SuperGlueRyan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 45Possum Kingdom |
In my white padded world of informational illusions, I look for escape or even a manifestation of reprieval. Past the guards with corkscrews, nurses with pasta and skillets, I beguile my way to fresh air, and unrestricted strings. A sort of bemusement sets upon me, Instead of fresh air, I'm surrounded by a psuedo up scale bistro. And am beckoned back to work. Everyday I do this with a start, but seemingly no end, trapped in "employment at will" [This message has been edited by SuperGlueRyan (08-22-2003 04:51 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Yes! Wonderful  |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Boy do I know this... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I enjoyed this one. angelblueyes |
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SuperGlueRyan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 45Possum Kingdom |
I'm glad to hear positive responses. I don't feel that is all that well written, but I feel so trapped at work that it drives me luny. This poem is based on a dream that I had. That speaks for itself. Thanks everyone! ~Stoic |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Of course it's friday, I'm at this torture chamber called School, and reading poetry... and listening to the beatles live at the bbc.. (this i must have!). anyway, babe, i just wanted to say that this fits perfectly because I have to work tonight.. you should stop by and say hello.. hottubbing in half an hour... woo... bye sweetie. |
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