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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-20 03:16 AM


lips stumble

it's a fact

lips
tremble
onto other lips
simple as that..

there was a picture
i once knew..
it went through
hallway
and out of veiw.
should've known,
like life passes
so does
artistic influence..
the paint chips
or fades it
simply walks
away.

it's a mad world
we're living in.

nothing seems too
familiar anymore..
getting to know
things and
people..
over and over again.

memorizing the conversations
i had yesterday,
and I'm sure
I'll have them again
some other day
with someone else

..that reminds me of you.


© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-08-20 03:17 AM


Very touching and so true!
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-08-20 03:43 AM


it's a mad cycle, isn't it?
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-08-20 03:47 AM


Meghan, this is so true.
Hugs  
Ethel

JilGirl
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4 posted 2003-08-20 04:53 AM


Actually factual!
Your title, "Ghost" is most
appropriate. Very fine write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (08-20-2003 04:54 AM).]

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