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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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Touching you Feeling you two things I'll never know in this century except in my dreams. Touching you feeling you a hunger I carve each day. Touching you feeling you but only in my heart can it ever be. Touching you feeling you two things I'll never know in this century except in my dreams. In my dreams I am touching you feeling you, and loving you. Touching you feeling you two things I'll never know except at night in my dreams. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
it will happen if you step up to the plate...take a swing...you might find the ball is hit out of the field...h |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
thank-you 1slick_lady :-) |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Hi froggy..:-) Good to see you posting here... The poem tells of a longing, perhaps it better that it not be satisfied, and stays a fantasy? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What? Froggies feel things? Who'd have dreamed it! I like this little verse -- darned good for an amphibian.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
pluck that magic twanger froggy and go for it....God, I've just showed everyone my age...well, not true, not true...I saw pictures...hehehehehe Great poem...don't hide in the shadows...writting about her...God...life is so short...and meant to be happy, do not fear rejection...fear not facing it and living life...moving forward if she in fact is not the one....Go for the Gusto..and live live live |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you all for your sweet comments.:-) I wrote this for a friend of mine who has a secret crush. To you LeeJ: I am a she froggy.:-) Thank-you all again for the comments. Ribbit |
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