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Sixteen was long ago...
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Sixteen was long ago... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sixteen Was Long Ago Strands of words were softly braided through skeins of music recklessly woven and draped me lovingly in silk, did he with patterned patter of tender loving and I will never forget him soft, then softer, held by his voice and lost, O lost, there was no choice and yearn, O yearning, I was quit forbore I then of any wit and I will never forget him heavy lashes hooded soft brown eyes jet dusk hair softly characterized his nondescript sense of abject living but yet he had this way of giving and I will never forget him he was such a young man's bad boy captured females' hearts as his toys and yes, O yes I fell for his ploy and the parents, O, he annoyed… and I will never forget him there's always one, there's always him that one who keeps a romance's whim when strands of words are softly braided when a love like that will never be sated and we will never forget them. 01.20.01 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done.. I'm sure more than one rememer..lol.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...yes...there will always be that one. Usually the bad boy kind..that made all the girls swoon.. Yes..there was one...and I remember, oh so well. Thank you for this..today...Karilea. ~'Remembering Sixteen' Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I was sixteen the first time I fell madly in love. And, no, we never forget them. I had lots of boyfriends before him, but noe that I remember like him...there's always that special one. He annoyed my parents, too, back then....but they run into him every now and then and they now think he is the nicest man. So, the boy who they thought was getting too serious is now a man they respect and like. Funny, huh? Yep, this brought back some good memories. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Strands of words were softly braided through skeins of music recklessly woven and draped me lovingly in silk, did he with patterned patter of tender loving and I will never forget him =========================== the moth years begin early... I was 13 I believe  *smiling at you for this one* "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I thought of Elvis, then of course the one that made my heart jump well that was Jackie Wilson, but then there was a very tall basketball player, named Wayne O. that introduced me to love, live, and laughter, and I was 16 for a long time. Thanks for the memories, woven through your hair indeed |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautifully penned memories, Karilea. Never forgotten...indeed.  Hugs,  ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...I remember him too...this was such a great memory ride, with you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
16 yup that was the first that went beyond a crush for me too, nice karilea |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup I was sixteen too. and yes we never forget them. Thanks for the memories Karilea. This is beautifully penned..as usual  hugs Sunshinygirl  Maree. fate is not just |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your "strands of words are softly braided". Ah, sixteen was a heart-tripping year for me as well!  EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh my gosh, this is just fabulous! I remember him well. His name was Bobby and I thought my father would have a breakdown before I moved on to the next heartthrob. I think every young teenage girl, at some point, has a crush on the 'bad boy.' I wanna be Bobby's girl I wanna be Bobby's girl That's the most important thing to me. And if I was Bobby's girl if I was Bobby's girl What a faithful thankful girl I'd be. When People ask of me what would you like to be Now that you're not a kid anymore? I know just what to say I answer right away There's just one thing I've been wishing for: I wanna be Bobby's girl I wanna be Bobby's girl . . . Each night I sit at home hoping that he will phone But I know Bobby has some one else. Still in my heart I pray there soon will come a day When I will have him all to myself. I wanna be Bobby's girl I wanna be Bobby's girl ... What a faithful thankful girl I'd be. What a faithful thankful girl I'd be. Bobby's girl I wanna be Bobby's girl |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
sweet memories...enjoyed... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"and I will never forget him there's always one, there's always him that one who keeps a romance's whim when strands of words are softly braided when a love like that will never be sated" Evening Sunshine! Well this one sure brought back alot of nice memories. And something tells me, he remembers too...  |
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