Open Poetry #28 |
A Kiss,,, |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I still remember the first kiss you gave me that left me feeling like i was in a soft sensual summer fog with my heart doing cartwheels over the moon and shooting stars flashing by on my first journey to loving you did you feel it~? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
QjQ Gosh I hope she did, enjoyed. |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
I felt it! Well written, beautifully descriptive. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...very nice Glenn! ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
if you did...I'm sure she did :-) good job Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Glenn, that was some kiss, huh? Hey, thanks for your sweet comments about my webpages. I'm glad that you liked it. Did you notice that you can put your own poems on your free webpages there? Ju7st wondering if you noticed. Hugs Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if she didnt, then i did hard to miss the kiss of romance coming from your sweet lips |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
even i felt it, isint the frist kiss wiht someone you know is speical just th best feeling in the world... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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