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Of Weaves and Leaves
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Of Weaves and Leaves |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Weaves and Leaves I wove a weave of make believe Heard my voice to fly the glen Danced a dance of dancing leaves And heard the echoes cry again I watched the palette of the sky Effervescent in its core Whisper pallor slow to die Etching symphonies of awe I lift my head to flense the air To feel the breeze upon my cheek To breathe the essence of its fair A touch of life at pleasures peek My mind was lost a phantoms preen A moment of poetic rhyme And wept a tear to beauties scene Served in spheres of changing time It was the closest I have come To know the thing I have become |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Beautifully woven, dear Sy...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I believe the older we grow the more we weep tears of joy....lovely write my friend |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely penned,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Beauty knows beauty.  LeeJ True and thank you.  QjQ Thank you for the nicely. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning my Sy guy! Loved today's wonderfully penned words. Now...time for tea? ~Summer morn hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Summer morn hugs with tea, what could be better. Good morning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Weave it again, Sy! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
And wept a tear to beauties scene Served in spheres of changing time Good to see you back. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, For you anytime. gemjop, Love to see your comments. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I watched the palette of the sky Effervescent in its core Whisper pallor slow to die Etching symphonies of awe I lift my head to flense the air To feel the breeze upon my cheek To breathe the essence of its fair A touch of life at pleasures peek My mind was lost a phantoms preen A moment of poetic rhyme And wept a tear to beauties scene Served in spheres of changing time It was the closest I have come To know the thing I have become =============================== what you have become is my morning sun.   LOVE the imagery and respectful awe of natures beauty in this Sy-babers. You weave your words with spun gold my dear winkie poetic prophet. *ww* "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'I lift my head to flense the air To feel the breeze upon my cheek To breathe the essence of its fair A touch of life at pleasures peek' Oh yes ... you are the word-smith I aspire to be~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Winkie poet with a glase A knight that turns a phrase But Randy with his awkward flips Would rather kiss you on the lips. WWRS |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, If I could I would But since I can't I'll stay and pant. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, my dear Mr. Tumbleweed! +*+*+ Of weaves and leaves, And summer breeze, I read in wonder As you do please! +*+*+  Linda |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I always have loved your flow! Love this  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Touched by an Angel again, thank you sweet. KoKo, Love your comment. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
,i>I lift my head to flense the air To feel the breeze upon my cheek To breathe the essence of its fair A touch of life at pleasures peek Seymour, I'm sooooo glad that you're back. Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Seymour, your use of vocabulary never ceases to astound me, and the way you use the ABAB rhyme scheme so effortlessly...the stories you tell of your days in life in these words...amazing! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, And I'm glad to be back. Passing, It's always a pleasure to read your comments. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Seymour, do forgive me for being so late. We have a new addition to our family. She has four legs...a tail like a flag, and I think she has eyes....not sure, there is alot of hair around them. hee hee. Our new pup, Meeka! She love poetry by the way, and I just read her your wonderful poem. She is now napping....I guess it soothed her so. Anyway, if I miss serving up goodies on certain mornings, Meeka is the reason why. Tonight we will have evening tea with warm butter tarts. yummy. Hugs to you dear poet sir. Chris [This message has been edited by Nightshade (08-19-2003 07:53 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Your poem is as welcome as a cool breeze in a summer window. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You are a sweet heart. Martie, |
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