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Open Poetry #28

Steal my Summer

ptwils165
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since 2002-11-29

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0 posted 2003-08-19 04:43 AM

She salvaged the sunlight-
a small wooden box;
She is sorry
like midnight dusk.

She banished the rain
with a flick of her tongue;
sighed in sparkles
of warm ocean night.

She guarded the dawn,
singing soft ancient rhyme;
signed her love
in a palmprinted sand.

She sent me a river
from a quiet moon's tide.

She is driftwood.

Steal my summer.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2003-08-19 04:54 AM

this is a beautiful description

ptwils165
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since 2002-11-29

Posts 50

2 posted 2003-08-19 01:59 PM

thank you!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-08-20 04:01 PM

Sometimes we have to fall off the page
just in order to get back on top...

This is more than love, it is a slip of summer's song...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-08-20 04:03 PM

This is beautiful...pure poetry..
Very very much enjoyed!
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

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