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Why Can't We... (To/For Gem..and myself.)
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Why Can't We... (To/For Gem..and myself.) |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Oh the wind will carry my name to you. And you shall not forget it. The sky holds the earth, never bound. Amazing how darkness makes footprints on the dirt road along the side of the ditch that grows as weeping willows.. we'll never know why they cry. Let's remember who we've been all along, deep down we knew that pulling the plug was the best thing we could do.. let's not forget that we are good enough for ourselves.. The sky needs no one, though it's held the earth.. it could always just let go.. So why can't we? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn... just damn that ending just went deep |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we never ever will forget those special insignias and imprints....Kaoru...astounding write, as always....thank you for sharing. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You? are the best y know that? This gave me goosebumps, all the way through. Let's remember who we've been all along, deep down we knew that pulling the plug was the best thing we could do.. let's not forget that we are good enough for ourselves.. This so perfectly captures, all that makes sense, and all that doesn't. It was the only way it could have gone, but why we can't let it go? perhaps because we saw another way it could have been. but maybe i'm just a stoopid dreamer. and thats just it. i knew who i was, and he? is trying to be someone he never will be. there are so many beautiful lines in this..it'll be printed and on my wall.  hugs to you Meg, thanks for understanding so completely. always. I'll finish rambling now. :0 Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
A wonderful expression of feelings,, |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This one is good... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
awesome meg knew gem would love it |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
beautiful....and of course gem loves it. not only is it great but gem would love anything with her name on it  I love being the btat  insanity is not a crime |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Meg...you are a flower...in the midst of an overgrown garden...helen |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Very Beautiful Kaoru. :-) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You will when it's time... beautiful There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Beautiful .... the various roads of any circumstance can be winding and difficult but you map loving hearts well! Wish you both a safe journey, and God speed! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
On the very last page and I almost missed it. This poem was pretty awesome and no matter who it was for they would have apperciated it just for the purity in it. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Meg . . . what an intense write and this: Let's remember who we've been all along, deep down we knew that pulling the plug was the best thing we could do.. yes, we know but damn it is a hard pull What a beautiful sentiment to a beautiful person . . . xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...stunning! Eric |
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