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Would you go there with me?
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Would you go there with me? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Would you go there with me? Are you ready to lie down, if the consummation will be the reaped promise, if the longing would finally quiet. Will it wash over me with clarity, as i lift up the veil that was never really there, or will it close for me like an aborted rosebud and engulf me in the doom of eternal darkness? I want to drift lackadaisically down the threshold, streaming with sunshine, drizzled in moonlight, with crystal slippers at the tap of the wand, becoming a prism of clear iridecense. Will you be there already waiting for me, wearing a white tux and tails, smiling ear to ear, holding mooncolored callalillies, wrapped bouquets with golden ribbons. Will you tell me "i told you so" Are you ready? Would you go there with me right now, if it's all that it's promised? [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-20-2003 06:45 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus . . . you write beautifully If I were him . . . yes if he doesnt go . . . his loss moon colored . . . just beautiful Michele xxoo |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
That's quite an invitation, Michele. How could he not?  Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Indeed, how could he not? |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
You got me smiling, I wonder who this was written for. Nice Job! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisitely beautiful! ~Summertime smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele, I'm on the way, be there in about an hour or so. Coffee, tea, soft wine, colored rose, and a ribbon for your hair. BC |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
* ~ ~ ~ * ~* > How Could One Resist < * ~ * ~ ~ ~ * ~ ~ >Terrific Penning< ~ ~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You write your invitation so well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write *smiling* |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
A lovely, tender, sincere write. Creatively imaged with precise wording! VERY much enjoyed! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you guys for coming by and seeing my vision |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"I tol ....." (Didn't I say I wouldn't say that!) LOL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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PassionandFun Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 60 |
Definately a very moving and romantic literary work! Whomever the lucky man is that you were speaking to better be off looking for the mooncolored calla lilies because i am sure that they have quickly sold out at most places up and down the east coast since you hit the "submit" button!! |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
visions may appear as dreams may come true. Enjoyed! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how beautifully love pens her song...how precious and allowing....lovely warmth and smiles....your a real treasure and how could he indeed resist |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
An invitation no man could resist....You write beautifully... |
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