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In Misty Candlelight
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In Misty Candlelight |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IN MISTY CANDLELIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ If once in misty candlelight my lips were to touch upon yours, and if your sigh would be of needs, my deepest whispers would flow gently into your ear… Words of passion would flow, of how fingers feather soft upon skin smooth would tease, as chills ran from top to bottom of your spine… In this misty candlelight of tempting brew my offer of delicate wine to taste is with passionate desire, as would be my lips when they meet with yours… ~~~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Now what gal could resist that? Enjoyed |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Oh you sweet talker you. Just add a little soft music you are all set for romance. Bon-Bon  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
As always BC, beautifully romantic. Hugs, Marti |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
skin smooth would tease, as chills ran from top to bottom of your spine can u guess where i am ticklish? |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This is so very romantic. Soft and light as your kiss in this poem. You know how to make chills run up and down the spine without the touch of your lips. Wonderful poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
**hugging you** for this beautiful poem that made me think of just how passionate I still am about my lover. I was beginning to wonder if the distance had gotten the best of us. Lovely you as always.. Dear John, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhh and a like a delicate wine this is to be savored . . . xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In this misty candlelight of tempting brew my offer of delicate wine to taste is with passionate desire, as would be my lips when they meet with yours… Passionate wine, indeed BC~ Now where did I leave my glass?  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ You write the romance that literally dances the page~ BEAUTIFUL is this~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Goodness. You give me a double-dose of romance every time! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
For some unimagineable reason, I found myself puckering up...  Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhhhh, swooning here, drew me right into the center of love...filled up to the brim with reassurance and the moment becomes one...filled with all things....lovely, dreamy, passionate...very good write, cause I felt it...incredibly embracing |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, Mr. Romance, you, have done it again..... look at all your ladies swooning over your words. LOL Very good writing as always, my friend.  Hugs Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautifully romantic... I like this very much! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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